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    Dawn of Truth

    Sunday, July 6, 2008, 08:33 AM EST [General]

    Sunrise 

     

     She chased

    the horrizon

    till it was sliced

    by the dawn

    riding the whispers

    of yesterdays gone.

     

    A canvass of colour

    the sky touched her

    and cried

    "aim for me,believe in

    all you see,I'm yours if you try"

    She watched

    in humble awe,

    as the sky,

    gave birth to light

     all her cares

    and worries

    disolving

    with the night.

     

    She didn't

    see it coming

    till the whispers

    turned into songs

    that her feet 

    had landed firmly

    on the path

    where she

    belonged. 

    The Dawn

    4 (1 Ratings)

    This is beautiful.
    Thank you so much for sharing :)
    Many Blessings To You!

    In Her Service,

    VoxFire
    July 06, 2008
    10:26 AM EST

    First thought. Wow, Nat.
    Some more thoughts. very poignant and expressive in feeling and artisty. Your storytelling in verse, the expression of emotion, and painting a image in your mind as it's read clicked together and created a true piece of art.

    ciao, jas

    Minstrel
    July 06, 2008
    10:55 AM EST

    Lovely & incredibly beautiful. Thank you for posting it - I guess you can say I read it at the right time.

    Hugs, Aphrodite's Daughter

    Aphrodite's Daughter
    July 06, 2008
    02:05 PM EST

    This is beautiful, my sister...and it touches a nerve for me.

    Beautifully written, and so easy to follow.

    Thank you for your words.

    Have a beautiful day, dear sister!

    Raven
    July 07, 2008
    03:26 PM EST

    That was truly beautiful! Also love the tag!
    Jen

    Diamond
    July 10, 2008
    12:36 AM EST

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